Hush little baby.
Dont you cry.
Daddy's having fun.
Mommy's gonna die.
Daddy has a funny look.
He kisses mommy with one word.
"Fook.."
It comes out slurred from the alcohol.
"Hush now, my baby doll.."
He whispers to mommy
And slits her throat so grottely
The wound is colourful, very strong to seem.
I wish I could awake from this horrible dream.
I whimper and start to cry.
Why, why, why did my mum just die?
Now Daddy looks at me
And I turn away
"Now my petal,
Let Daddy have his way."
I freeze at those words.
Those sick fuckin' words.
Dark figures,
Surround him.
Blocking out the sun.
"Hush now my darling,
Its only a bit of fun..."
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First,
No
I have not been raped by my father.
Nor has my mother's throat been slit.
This poem is just a figure of my imagination,
A taste of what goes on in my brain..
Im an odd girl,
Dont take it for granted.
A lot of things rush through my mind a minute.
Edit: I really dont care if people like it or not.
Just stop posting that you dont like it.
Im 12 years old for god sake.
Its the best I can do!
Grottely = dirty, horribly.
No
I have not been raped by my father.
Nor has my mother's throat been slit.
This poem is just a figure of my imagination,
A taste of what goes on in my brain..
Im an odd girl,
Dont take it for granted.
A lot of things rush through my mind a minute.
Edit: I really dont care if people like it or not.
Just stop posting that you dont like it.
Im 12 years old for god sake.
Its the best I can do!
Grottely = dirty, horribly.
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This is really good.
-Me Rocks!!! But not as hard as your POEM!!!!!!
Beautiful work!
Great way of writing and getting this stuff out
love the icy finger feeling on your spine when u read this.
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"Leave behind this place so negative and blind and cynical,
And you will come to find that we are all one mind
Capable of all that's imagined and all conceivable." JMK
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duuuuddeeeee so i was like walking and then and then............yup nothing up there
cute..........
YYAYYY!!! YOU GUYS ROCKs!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Now viewing to carnage,
The dying and the dead.
Im the last one standing,
With my hards warm and red.
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Now viewing to carnage,
The dying and the dead.
Im the last one standing,
With my hards warm and red.
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Now viewing to carnage,
The dying and the dead.
Im the last one standing,
With my hards warm and red.
Real easy too.
You pick a subject and randomly rhyme things with it!
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Now viewing to carnage,
The dying and the dead.
Im the last one standing,
With my hards warm and red.
All comments a deeply taken in!
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Now viewing to carnage,
The dying and the dead.
Im the last one standing,
With my hards warm and red.
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